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UPDATE 5/14/06: I have decided to make this a multi-part fic and show how Audrey talks to Jack about the thoughts that are haunting her in part 1 and how they deal with it. Part 2 is now up.

This is just something I thought I would try. It’s totally different from any of my other stories and I hope it’s okay. I am not usually a big fan of stories that rehash episodes and hash out a character’s inner thoughts, or at least, I’ve never had a desire to write such a story before. But I thought it would be interesting to go back and reexamine Audrey’s actions during the 12 PM episode in light of recent revelations, as they add a whole new twist to actions we may have previously considered insignificant. It’s the first fanfic I’ve written in prose format, so I’m a little nervous about it, and I would love to know what you think, so if you get a chance to review I would really appreciate it.

Note to overseas viewers: this fic is based on the 12 PM episode, but it looks at that episode in light of revelations in the 9 PM episode.

• Part 1
• Part 2
• Part 3
• Part 4